Hot Thursday – Feedback Please

The first few chapters of Hot Thursday is now up on the site and ready for feedback. The novel is finished, but not formally published yet, so there is still time to make changes. I love Franny’s wise-cracking – but if the consensus is that she is so irritating you’d rather poke your eye with a stick than read more, I still have time to tone it down. If you would like a few more chapters, let me know and I will post them – though not enough for you to discover why she finds herself fighting for her life in a sealed fish tank, or why I’ll never look at Cirencester’s open air swimming pool in quite the same way again.